Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2013 2:25:15 GMT
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The Basics
Name: Jak Mar
Nickname/Other names: Buddy and Dark
Gender:
Age: [remember, if you have good reason, you can tweak the character's age] 17
Hometown: Haven City
Canon: Jak and Daxter
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The Outside and the In
Face Claim/PB
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Appearance: Jak Mar is a short teen about 5'5. Before he shifted, Jak had long blondish green hair, along with long ears. He wear a pair of goggles on his head, and had a green goatee on his face. He wore a bluish shirt with a brown belt and a circle on it, along with a blue belt.
Jak Mar's dark form before being shifted, was with greyish hair and pure black eyes, long claws and demon horns. This is his Dark Jak form.
After being shifted, Jak Mar is a little bit taller human at 5'7 with blonde hair, and a blonde goatee who regulary dyes his hair and his goatee part green to match his old form. He still retains his goggles on his head, and his blue boots. But he now wears a dark blue shirt with long blue jeans, and his blue boots to match. Jak has dark blue eyes that regularly change to red whenever he cannot control his anger, sparks come out of him and he cannot control who he hurts in the process. Jak's still closed off right now.
Personality: Jak's a teenager at the age of 17 that was literally thrown out of a peaceful situation in the past, and thrown into Haven City which is the future. He's been tortured for two years with dark eco in prison to be in the dark warrior program, only to find out he was a failed experiment. After Jak escapes prison with Daxter's help, He is very angry and reckless. Not only does he love to shoot anything that moves, he loves anything that moves in general. He loves to race on a zoomer, he loves weapons, and he also loves taking out metalheads. (a monster in his world). He could careless about anybody else except for Daxter but he quickly finds out he has to deal with others a little...more friendly in the near future.
Jak doesn't take any crap from anyone, the first time you meet him you won't get a friendly hello but a grab to the shirt of the person in front of him and Jak giving them a loud speech about "Who the hell are you?"
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Right Up to that Key Moment
History:
Jak Mar grew up literally a mute little kid in Haven City, with his mother unknown and father missing. He was taken back into the past and raised by his adoptive uncle, Samos and his daughter Keira. Jak meets Daxter, a tall orange haired kid with buck teeth and freckles. They eventually become best friends and start off on a dare by Jak to go to Misty Island behind Samos's back. Jak is mute during this time, so Daxter does all the talking. As Jak and his friend Daxter explored a precursor artifact, Daxter is knocked in accidently to a lake of dark eco by Jak tripping.
Jak's friend Daxter was now a orange muskrat-like creature called at Ottsel. They go back to Samos's house, and he shames them for going to Misty Island behind his back but he tells Jak and Daxter of a place where someone named Gol and Maia, can change Daxter back to normal.
So they go on various adventures to collect power cells from various people and they in turn help Jak and Daxter by giving them a power cell to power various items and to change Daxter back.
Later, Samos's daughter, Keira and himself find out from the Red Sage that Gol and Maia actually are flooding the world with Dark Eco and setting the Lurkers to attack people.
Jak and the others have a choice here, turn Daxter back or save the world. To defeat Gol and Maia's precursor robot, the sages all join in and use their eco to create Light eco.
Jak is sent to the future where he runs into Haven City, along with Samos, Keira and Daxter. They all see a big monster come out of the rift gate as it opens. The rift rider suddenly jerks forward and Jak and the others are now in the future. Now seperated, Jak and Daxter are alone in Haven City only to find a Commander named Erol and his men, the Krimzon guard surround Jak and his friend. Daxter runs off, leaving Jak standing there, not being able to speak and afraid. The Krimzon guards knock him out and drag Jak off to prison for two years. Jak learns how to speak and is experimented on with dark eco constantly on and off. This is where Jak gains a new persona per say, "Dark" Jak.
After two years had past, Daxter finds Jak angry and able to speak for the first time. Jak's first words were "I'm going to kill Praxis!" and he busts out of the chair with Dark Jak almost not realizing he was going to kill his friend, Daxter.
With that in mind, Daxter helps Jak escape prison and then they start their way through Haven City.
Jak meets Kor for the first time, which was an old man that helped them find their way to the Underground. The underground is where Jak first meet Torn, and Tess. Jak finds out that Torn is a ex- Krimzon guard and he left because of things they put him through he doesn’t want to talk about, and Tess who is a weapon specialist.
As soon as Jak joins the underground, he became shifted into this world. He finds himself completely changed, his ears were a lot smaller, he was taller, his hair was blonde, and his clothing had changed somewhat.
Key Moment: Jak had just been introduced to the Underground movement, meeting Torn and Tess for the first time in his life after escaping prison.
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A Roleplaying Shift
RP Sample:
Jak woke up with a headache. Not just any headache... a pounding one. What the hell just happened to him? Not only was he with daxter at the time, there was this woman who got in his face, and a tough man who dared pointing at his chest. They thought they knew it all at the time, but he didn't care. He was worried. One, Daxter was gone and two he had changed. He was no longer long eared and his hair had changed to all blonde, along with his goatee. He got off the ground and growled, hoping someone was around so he could take things out on the nearest person near him.
That person just happened to be one of the friendly Tenebrae staff "Hello, are you new here, sir..? Or should I call you Jak?"
Jak was shocked, how the hell did this person already know his name..."
"Why should i fucking care about this place.. . things are crappy enough as it is..."
One of the Tanebrae staff said "Now Now, Mr Jak... Follow me to your new neighborhood.."
Jak growled, he wasn't going anywhere near what this female was talking about. "Not a fucking chance, lady."
The staff member got a little firmer "I said...Come on Jak to your new ...NEighborhood.." She decided it was going to be a long day trying to get this person into Tanebrae.
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